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Thanks for your comment.
I am just a normal member. We have many people are good at English (as you), but why don't we have a English community for everyone who want to improve Eng skills? Or we are just standing and look around or waiting for something else forever.
Anyway, thanks for your sharing.

 

done. Thanks

 

I agree with you. English is a difficult language for people use it as secondary language. It's wonderful if we have more and more places where we talk each other by English. In my company, everybody use English a lot and their purpose is only communicate to understand each other, not to write a poem or become a English writer, so my private opinion is the beginner not to much consider grammar!
PS: I'm sure there are many mistakes in my comment! If you don't mind please help me correct it! Thanks!

 

Oh, don't get me wrong, I'm looking for an English club myself and I don't have anything against your group.
Yes, an English group for everyone at every level is a good idea. My point is:

You are trying to make people to join your group, like a sale-man is trying to sell a mobile phone; and you make so many basic mistakes, like the sale-man tells his costumer: "I don't know how to turn the phone on". It's just...well, first I wanted to join but this stopped me, gave me a feeling that this group is not serious.

The "weird writing style" somehow is acceptable, but all those grammar mistakes are not. I made mistake in my first comment too, but I edited and fixed it. And perhaps you write so fast so it is still somewhat acceptable for you to make something wrong, but how about the poster? Have the group checked it carefully before publishing it?

Anyway, don't wanna ruin your topic, please just consider this as an advice and good luck to your group

 

5giay forum has a lot members who good at English!!!
Up for hot topic!!!

 

Have I said anything about other people's mistake or just the topic owner's? How can the adviser help anyone if he's not good himself? And I do believe that you at least try to use correct BASIC grammar first if you really want to improve your skill. How can you do math if you don't know what does one plus one equal?

And for correcting you comment, if you allow me:

 

I think you should show the mistakes, so the beginner like me and other members can learn from it! Thanks!

 

Sorry, I made them bold but forgot that your original post is bold itself. Fixed it
Or do you mean the mistake in the poster?

 

Good, good! Thanks for your help! The topic is so great and need more valuable comments like yours!

 

So far, you can red color the mistake. Please fix all mistakes from all comments! Keep on your good job!

 

Sorry, I can't do that. You asked for help with your comment but other people didn't, I'm afraid it would be like showing off if I just go and fix everything. Besides, this is a topic to introduce iziEnglish club so this correcting-grammar-thing is kinda out of topic.

I'll just go and correct the introduction in the first post, again, just consider this an advice

 

Well, it was very easy if u hadnt post your ad below your note. I dont disagree with ur ideal but the way u talk makes all members think that u r a sale man who wanna be getting target of the month by encourage people to join ur club.
Besides, your ad. ,as everyone can see, is advertising for the organiztion maybe two which have been doing business as taking students to the abroad Uni. and get the paperwork fee.

 

Thanks for all your comments.

That s the way 3 trees can make a forest, but not one.

yeu_tinh and J.B, I ve got your points. Moreover, i do hope you guy will give me a hand to help another members to sharpen their Eng skills, at least in this thread.

Good night to all.